the story and plot are amazing, I like the way how the story flows and how it explains the parts but few things were spoiling the story like - punctuation marks were breaking few moments, the continuous use of a word in a single sentence (ex-i and she) that what I could point out if you fix these issues you'll rock it, good luck author you're doing awesome!
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