Review Detail of bibiyenini in MY PRECIOUS.

I have to say you have an intriguing plotline ahead of you. The idea of twins with distinct differences in them may have been a rare imagination ahead. I was a little bit put off on reading the synopsis since it was too long and maybe a little dumping of information. The synopsis was the first one that the readers will read, and if they have read that long, they may back out on reading since you said it all through the front page. Make something that makes the readers plunge into the story because they were so curious about what will happen. That's all I can say, but one thing is for sure, learn from the experience here on WN! You have a great journey ahead!