Wow, it is a nice book. Narration and description are on point. It has its own sad fate that brings out the locked emotions in someone... Little errors but can be overlooked as we all are not perfect. It doesn't change the flow of the story and the pace... Author did a good job. Nice one

Nice! Interesting story! I like the action, I like the drama. So many names at the beginning... but that's fine. Please just not use the word "CEO" in your novel. So many people already have "allergy" for that :))) Besides you are doing exellent job! Keep writing! Good luck with it!

Intriguing plot. Two babies separated since birth, having different attitudes... Till what I've read, I found the story really interesting. There are a few grammar mistakes but I think you can work on those as they are not obvious while reading. Good luck [img=recommend]

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From what I read I was quite interested and quickly. The feeling of disappointment of the baby that survived and was not taken was heart-wrenching but set the mood for the entire story perfectly.

The start is really promising and points to a great story every way, flow of thought is very good, several pages along the story the characters and story gain momentum, keeping that pace and story line is very difficult and you wouldn’t realize it unless you were to write a story. Waiting for the horror part now.

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Nice stuff.!! I love the way author takes the theme. apt title and i wanna appreciate writer's ability to Express and communicate the idea through written words.