Review Detail of Jimpaly in 21 Years

The mystery in this story is just perfect. Both the setting and the plot are very creative. And especially the ending—it was very unexpected. My only critique is that the story progresses a bit quick on the last two chapters. I really see a lot of potential and it would definitely be an even more enjoyable read if it were spread out in more chapters. The thriller id very well done but it could be improved too with more descriptions. Overall, I loved the short story, and if you ever look to rewrite it in more detail, I’ll be the first to read!