Review Detail of Love_venerable in Ghost Girl of MHA (Rewrite in progress)

Item: Ghost Girl of MHA (Rewrite in progress)
Rating: 3.2

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Love_venerableLv133yrLove_venerable

meh just average + .2 bc of yuri . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .. . . . . . . ... . . . . . .. . .

Ghost Girl of MHA (Rewrite in progress)

UncrownedKing

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UncrownedKingAuthorUncrownedKing

anything more constructive you'd like to add? like where the story can be improved, what you'd like to see more or less of? since I'm going to be rewriting a large chunk of the story this is a good time for constructive feedback.

3yr