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can you use POV? ok I understand if this writing style is taken from the point of view of mc or POV1 person. but you mix pov1 with narrator's POV without switching between POV 1 with narrator's POV. it's very annoying. please be more consistent. if this story only focuses on POV 1 there is no fun. to be honest in my opinion. because each storyline only focuses on what MC is living. just monotonous. I prefer narrator's POV, because in this writing style, you can tell or take a different angle, POV 1 only tells what is felt, experienced, carried out and seen. Moreover, this fanfic should be wider and not obstructed because it focuses on the MC. some original characters must also be included so that the story is better than just from the point of view of mc. thanks

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