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Overall it's a mostly decent story. Interesting World building, some really intriguing concepts, and some really cool side characters. However the big weakness of this book is the MC: He starts as a whiny, overthinking, self pitying, and overall very negative person. Which normally wouldn't be a problem except for one little detail: the Author drags Character development out WAY too long. After 187 chapters, the Character development can be called "slightly there" at best, and despite several life altering events that *should* improve the Character in a positive direction to a larger degree considering how jarring they are, the MC barely changes. Now, I'm not really an advocate of MCs who have drastic changes of personality practically overnight, this author has swung the pendulum too far to the other end, given the start state of the character in my opinion. TLDR; the Book is Good but, MC personality is that of a garbage human being, and takes too long (in my opinion at least) to improve

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My Servant Is An Elf Knight From Another World

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