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hartpeler
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2020-11-13 00:14

Hey, It's me. Hartpeler! Thank you for paying a visit on my book. Just a great heads up for you guys, thank you for you guys's support on WFP that led this book entered gold nominee of WFP winner!! *clap hands* So, as My workload had started to slowed down. This book will started to release daily like Tales of the Dragon Mortal starting from today. And near dec, new cover incoming!! :D :D :D :D :D

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DDLC
DDLCLv2

Tis’ was a pleasure

ProfessorofCulture
ProfessorofCultureLv14

yuri? harem?

hartpeler
hartpelerAuthor

it wasn't it's really butt spanking

Jeremy_Kramer
Jeremy_KramerLv5

So, its not yuri? That sucks...

hartpeler
hartpelerAuthor

it will ruin the whole context of the book if I put Yuri/yaoi reference here. apologize in the advance

Jeremy_Kramer:So, its not yuri? That sucks...
DDLC
DDLCLv2

Nah don’t worry butt spanking is what i’m here for

hartpeler:it will ruin the whole context of the book if I put Yuri/yaoi reference here. apologize in the advance
Snoodle_Booper
Snoodle_BooperLv4

Confused but still intrigued....

hartpeler:it will ruin the whole context of the book if I put Yuri/yaoi reference here. apologize in the advance
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Ayun_8947
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Reverendbonafide
ReverendbonafideLv12

Well it's time to be a downer again. In all honesty it's an interesting story. I will not pretend that it wasn't the title of the book that got me here, though it isn't why I read on. For better or wore the story is engaging, and attempts to use elements from our reality in this fictional setting. That said I have three problems with the book right now. First off I'm not even sure I'm reading English or another language that's been put through an online translator. I Don't mean to be offensive but my brain hurts from trying to read the text in this work. A lot of the first sixty chapters had paragraphs that came across as complete nonsense or more accurately put were incomprehensible. Then, when I could understand what was being said, I would be led to question the logic of the characters. Not in a good way though. Second, nothing is explained in this book. This may be a language barrier thing again, but a lot of the concepts mentioned just weren't communicated well enough for me to understand. Thus, for me the world development is quite poor. Third, drawing back to a previous point, The logic and actions of the characters is exaggerated? I'm not quite sure if that's how I would actually describe it but they do many unreasonable things. While this may be intentional I personally just didn't enjoy it. Personal feelings aside, It didn't seem fitting to try to incorporate so many logical and illogical concepts together in the same story and sometimes paragraph. But this may again be a language barrier thing, and I'm entirely wrong about this point. Either way the story has potential, but that's about it. It has "potential". I just don't think the book was ready to publish in "English" and thus won't be paying for the premium chapters. THAT SAID, it's an interesting read. You should definitely read it before you have an opinion on it.

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