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HotRedFlaming
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Ive read til latest chap, It was a good read I enjoyed it. The writing is somewhat smooth, and I like these concepts where scifi meets fantasy. Ye the mc is OP and stuff and its kinda like the isekais. The mc age is not told or I just forgot but he seems to be a teenager. The world building is also good and the classes and weapons and AI. As for the criticism I just find the princess a bit cliche but I still think it was fine. More rooms for improvement in the future chapters. Anyway this is just a review to support the author.

The Raud Vargr (HIATUS)

Alpha_Medic

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Lit_Nerd
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I'm not a person who does things halfheartedly! Be expecting a new read tomorrow!

HotRedFlaming:You dont need to do that, I wont force u if my story is not your cup of tea. But some words of motivation is enough for me.
Alpha_Medic
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Thanks a million, HotRedFlaming, for the review! I purposely leave the specific ages unmentioned to let the reader kind of guess at it. As far as the tropy princess, it's one of my goals. Taking common tropes and eventually turning them on their head.

HotRedFlaming
HotRedFlamingLv3HotRedFlaming

I read your work and gave you a review to support you cause you defended me when I got dissed. Hhaha, I got disheartened at that time, but thanks for standing up for me.

Alpha_Medic:Thanks a million, HotRedFlaming, for the review! I purposely leave the specific ages unmentioned to let the reader kind of guess at it. As far as the tropy princess, it's one of my goals. Taking common tropes and eventually turning them on their head.
Alpha_Medic
Alpha_MedicAuthorAlpha_Medic

No worries! I'm going to try and read your story at some point and leave a review, but today is my family day, so I'll be with my kids for most of it. Keep your chin up and never stop working toward your dream!

HotRedFlaming:I read your work and gave you a review to support you cause you defended me when I got dissed. Hhaha, I got disheartened at that time, but thanks for standing up for me.
HotRedFlaming
HotRedFlamingLv3HotRedFlaming

You dont need to do that, I wont force u if my story is not your cup of tea. But some words of motivation is enough for me.

Alpha_Medic:No worries! I'm going to try and read your story at some point and leave a review, but today is my family day, so I'll be with my kids for most of it. Keep your chin up and never stop working toward your dream!
Alpha_Medic
Alpha_MedicAuthorAlpha_Medic

Sorry about this. My little bro had apparently signed in on my phone and I didn't realize. This comment was from me.

Lit_Nerd:I'm not a person who does things halfheartedly! Be expecting a new read tomorrow!