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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv44yr
2020-11-15 09:42

My second review after reading some more. This was a story that has fantasy and modern weaponry. The author has a good grasp about the grammar and as well as a creative narration. Top tier nonetheless! I gotta resume reading more on the novel and I hope the author will release more!

The Raud Vargr (HIATUS)

Alpha_Medic
4.9
53 Chs

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Alpha_Medic
Alpha_MedicAuthor

Thanks for the secondary review! I hope I can continue to earn your glowing words of praise! <3

3yr
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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

You are welcome! It was nice reading your book. I thank you for that!

Alpha_Medic:Thanks for the secondary review! I hope I can continue to earn your glowing words of praise! <3
3yr
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123removed
123removedLv1

So this is the first story I've read on WebNovel, and it's a great first impression! If all stories on here are so well-written it's going to be my new favorite platform. I especially love the somewhat 'nerdy' feeling this story has, that fantasy world sounds like a dream come true indeed. 🙌 You've created an amazingly easy-to-read fantasy story. It has a very pleasant pace, and while you introduce tons of new elements I'm never confused nor bored with lengthy descriptions. Added to my library! 🤗

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zetsubouaichan
zetsubouaichanLv14

Sci-fi and magic, huh? Kinda reminds me of Artemis Fowl, one of my favorite series ever (the book, not the movie) and a bit of Release that Witch. Anyway, the story is pretty cool. The writing is good, smooth, and easy to get into. The characters are fun and interesting (I like ALICE!). I love the bit of comedy in this book. It made me chuckle once in a while. But now, I'm very curious to know where this story will lead us to and how this magic and science in this book will work together. Hopefully, the author will continue to write until the end.

4yr
Alpha_Medic
Alpha_MedicAuthor

Author here! At time of this posting, I just finished releasing Volume 1 and have begun the preparations for self-publishing. Don't worry, I'm not so vain as to think my story is perfect. :P I wanted to share the links to my other platforms so you can stay up to date on my novels and maybe even help me write one! Help me write on Twitch: https://***.twitch.tv/alpha_medic Join my Discord: https://discord.gg/2gT2zwf Follow me on Twitter: https://twitter.com/FenMed25 Support me on Patreon for perks: https://***.patreon.com/AlphaMedic I even have YouTube: https://***.youtube.com/channel/UCKN5DQUPoH0F5FW6ZObyyPQ I have said it before, and I'll say it again. You are all amazing, and I'm truly blessed to have such a group of wonderful readers to help me explore Alex and ALICE's story. Thank you so much, and I look forward to seeing their continued adventures alongside you!

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Vidit_Verma
Vidit_VermaLv4

The writing is nice so far and I enjoyed reading it a lot. The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . My best wishes are always with you Author 😇. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Saeven07
Saeven07Lv10

Here's a review since I liked it very much! The writing quality is fantastic as it is easily understood. Also the humor is just...top tier! The character design is lovely as they work. The MC is somehow relatable, Alice is very likable - and their partnership is *chef's kiss*. Meanwhile the others managed to be amazing in their own ways, three dimensional and have their own goals. The world is hugeee but explored (there's more, I assume). Yep I totally love it.

4yr
cherlyswan
cherlyswanLv10

Gonna straight out give a five star because I loved it. I started reading and couldn't stop. The story is really captivating. awesome world building and quality writing. I honestly love how sassy ALICE is. As a ******** anime and manga fan I would love to see this story become an anime some day if possible. Really great work!

4yr
Alexandra_An
Alexandra_AnLv2

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Jo_J
Jo_JLv13

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Drapetomaniac12
Drapetomaniac12Lv4

I don't read- haven't read isekai novels so can't comment much about the story plot xD. But I absolutely love the book because of Alex and Alice's interactions! There wasn't any grammatical error. Not even a single one. I'm not kidding; not even a single one! The author is exceptionally talented, and he pays a lot of attention to his work :) All the best!

3yr
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