Review Detail of Saeven07 in The Vampire's Love: You Are My Destiny

First of all, I love the way how you've written the setting! The writing quality is alright although I think the transition can be a little less awkward. Seeing as this is only the first five chapters, I haven't seen much of the other characters. Nevertheless, I love MC's devotion to her family. Meanwhile, her father is the character I dislike the most (lol). Great job! I'll be waiting for more :>