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Claudia_Angelina
Claudia_AngelinaLv153yr
2022-03-31 06:55

I really did not enjoy this book. It was all over the place, the speech felt very unnatural, and the development took forever. No offense to the author, It just fell very flat and the speech was very stiff.

The Vampire's Love: You Are My Destiny

Lizabelle88
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