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Shia_Akatsuki
Shia_AkatsukiLv34yr
2020-12-11 12:18

Writing Quality: Normally just average, but the first few chapters were below my standards. Stability of Updates: I just binge read my way to last chapter, and I have no longer gotten any more chapters. I think Imma just give it a four. Story Development: Some things re kinda forced, and the Author seems to like BL, so not all that much suited to my tastes. (I don't mean to offend Yaoi fans on this one) Character Design: There isn't much to say here, is there? What is there to say here, though, is that sometimes Characters start acting OOC. World Background: World is the same as that of KnB, but the author decided to add the NBA world to it, which isn't a bad choice, but rather, the integration between the two worlds isn't perfect.

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Jasonenrick
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I love the start and the wishes are really good! I look forward to see where this is going! The grammar and everything is good and not some Chinese google translate shit. The only things that Bugs me is......where are the Chapter homie!

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AnakMelayu
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_Solomon_
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everything about this fanfic is op.... the mc isn't freakin overpowered and the plot is also quite good ngl and this is one of the best knb FF ever

4yr
YoruReader
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Please rate :) (Author shameless rating his own work) My first and probably the only one I will make , Probably 1 chapter per day if it gets somewhat anyone to read

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uncultured
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I haven't gone too far in the novel so my review may change later on. After reading the review of Jasonenrick, you did alright. The story seems like it's good so far but the view you're giving us is an "eh" Also your grammar lowkey sucks. For instance, punctuation. You seem like you don't really know when to use them and your spelling is sometimes off too. I suggest you download Grammarly as it should help you out with punctuation and spelling or get an editor. If you need an editor, I can always help :)

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GodofKiyotaka
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Daoista7TnOd
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are you gonna continue this book cause this is good and it is a shame if it is dropped

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Storm20074
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Great book and setting. I wish the author could start updating at least a chapter a week. The book is great though I want to see how it turns out.

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