Review Detail of Eternal_Ouroboros in Avatar The Last Airbender: Cold Paths

[Writing Quality] The writing quality of this novel is surprisingly well done compared to the usual fan fiction broken grammar you would usually expect when reading one on this site. Improvements can be made and I hope that as this project goes on, so will its quality. Great job, keep it up! [Stability of Updates] Though I've never personally cared about this aspect, I checked it out and it's a stable schedule indeed. I approve. [Story Development] I enjoyed reading the novel and the development, although on the faster end of the spectrum, isn't all that bad. The plot itself is well structured and it's an enjoyable read. [Character Design] Since this is a fan fiction, there isn't much to say about the canon characters so far except them being well portrayed and the fact that they don't feel out of character. The OCs so far are quirky and all have a reason to be in the plot and aren't there simply to be there. They're kept simple enough to ensure the plot isn't overly complicated, but spiced up enough to make sure the story doesn't get boring. Great job~! [World Background] The world background is well described, from landscape and horizons to immediate environment in tricky situation, they're all well described. I haven't seen a lot of avatar transmigration fan fictions and this one is a solid five star for me. I'm eager to read more chapters. Keep it up author!!~