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2020-11-27 18:43

estaba deseando por un buen fanfic de avatar y aqui llego uno, no tengo nada de que quejarme, un exelente prota y su evolucion en el mundo ya de por si exelente de avatar, la situaciones que le suceden a akira no se sienten forzadas, se sienten como si fuera un personaje cannon de lo bien que lo integraron al mundo, ademas lograron reproducir muy bien las personalidades de los otros personajes de la serie. en fin 10/10

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