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NewGoldie
NewGoldieLv133yrNewGoldie

why? even in the start your already Nerfing him like wtf. I just dont understand Nerfing characters just to have a fight scene with bunch of kids, why? why did even give him that power in the first place if just gonna nerf him anyway. You can always go the route weak to strong. not just to Nerfed him just to start weak bullShiiit, there's a difference. cuz we gonna have a boring training arc just to power up your already boring MC( in hindsight he is already strong). Now the MC kinda getting worse by the minute personality wise. You have a Nerfed character + his unlikable personality then you have unenjoyable reading experience.

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Shinobi Life!

UchihaFanatic

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NewGoldie
NewGoldieLv13NewGoldie

UchihaFanatic:If the nerf you are talking about is making the goro goro no mi chakra based then its because my inspiration for the story is 'The strongest hokage' where the mc of that story also needs chakra for their devil fruit ability. Also wdym fight kids? The tags I put were weak to strong and action, I never said he was going to be OP from the start. As for why I gave him that power it's becuase it I liked the devil fruit ability. Anyway I won't change it from my story. You are also free to drop my book since I ain't forcing anyone to read. After all, everyone has different tastes. But thanks for reviewing I appreciate u not just outright rating one star and not explaining anything.
UchihaFanatic
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If the nerf you are talking about is making the goro goro no mi chakra based then its because my inspiration for the story is 'The strongest hokage' where the mc of that story also needs chakra for their devil fruit ability. Also wdym fight kids? The tags I put were weak to strong and action, I never said he was going to be OP from the start. As for why I gave him that power it's becuase it I liked the devil fruit ability. Anyway I won't change it from my story. You are also free to drop my book since I ain't forcing anyone to read. After all, everyone has different tastes. But thanks for reviewing I appreciate u not just outright rating one star and not explaining anything.

NewGoldie
NewGoldieLv13NewGoldie

it's not about if is chakra based, you can based the devil fruit on anything may it be chakra,mana,nature, life force, ki, chi, or force I don't care. but if you lock his power just to Nerfed so he can play with bunch of kids; nah men. early chapters should be the highlight of why we should like your character not outright hate your MC this early in the story. The reason why I drop this fanfic is (Nerfed Unlikable Main Character). piece of advice make your character likeable in early chapters if your character have a a strong power don't outright Nerfed him to the point of being useless. example of a good Nerf: since you based it in chakra his not intangible to a strong wind user/jutsu or a rubber kekkei genkai is a good counter to him.