Review Detail of TheShadowMan in Key of Light(Transfer)

The story is alright. Needs a lot of editing grammar wise and some rearranging for the sentence structure in my opinion. The MC rather instantly becomes OP and there are some points where it doesn't make sense or the logic is sort of left it for you to guess at which is annoying. The fact that its a crossover world with bunch of merged makes the world background unkown and messy. Still, an okay casual read.