I absolutely love this fanfic, characters are good, story is interesting and fun to read but the best part about this is our MC, because he is actually smart and uses his brain. Another thing I really like are his powers, you build and explore the idea of human magic as well as his system in intriguing way while not limiting yourself to one power, you're always expand MC's arsenal which makes it fresh without being tedious to read. I really hope you will try to expand the world of DxD it has a lot of wasted potential by being solely focused of Japan, from what I've seen you're trying to do just that so please keep it that way and don't stay in Japan for too long, think about visiting Greece but I personally really want to see your edition of Egyptian pantheon. All I have left to say is this - DON'T DROP IT.
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LIKEI'll be honest. I have no idea if you meant me making another crossover by visiting Greece or into the Egyptian pantheon. If so, I will think about it; however, if you meant me literally making an original version of the Egyptian pantheon, then you're asking for a tall order that I may or may not be able to do. And by that, I mean my motivation to do significant research into Egypt mythology to turn it to fix with the DxD world.
About Greece I mean you already introduced Nyx why not add other Greek gods into the mix from what I know there where others Greek gods introduced in DxD, about Egyptian gods I just think it's fun idea, there aren't many stories that talk about Egyptian gods but, if you don't have good idea and think it's too much of a hassle then don't do it. It's just idea of mine that I thought would be cool.