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Review Detail of Yanagi_sense1 in DxD World

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Yanagi_sense1
Yanagi_sense1Lv133yrYanagi_sense1

immediately lost interest after MC acted like an idiot and confessed to sona...MC is supposed to be coolheaded and acts naturally since he knows the plot and all while issei is supposed to be the perverted one...you just had to go and make MC an idiotic buffoon that is just as perverted as issei

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DxD World

SupremGG

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SupremGG
SupremGGAuthorSupremGG

it works at times, or when the AI ​​of the system wants it. I don't think anyone would like a mc pokerface without emotions, it would be monotone and boring, and I like to write some funny emotions. but in general, that's it.

LordOfLaziness:the unique problem with me it's the part that he have gamer's mind... but it looks like it doesn't have
SupremGG
SupremGGAuthorSupremGG

kinda pointless to call him a pervert just for an exchange of conversations, and well, for me it doesn't matter since I made that dialogue more like a joke

LordOfLaziness
LordOfLazinessLv5LordOfLaziness

the unique problem with me it's the part that he have gamer's mind... but it looks like it doesn't have

SupremGG:kinda pointless to call him a pervert just for an exchange of conversations, and well, for me it doesn't matter since I made that dialogue more like a joke
LordOfLaziness
LordOfLazinessLv5LordOfLaziness

Oh.... Entendi.... Ele não sendo idiota/beta ou simp ta ótimo Obrigado pela atenção man

SupremGG:it works at times, or when the AI ​​of the system wants it. I don't think anyone would like a mc pokerface without emotions, it would be monotone and boring, and I like to write some funny emotions. but in general, that's it.
Seud
SeudLv4Seud

So he’s being controlled by the AI. That’s already a big no.

SupremGG:it works at times, or when the AI ​​of the system wants it. I don't think anyone would like a mc pokerface without emotions, it would be monotone and boring, and I like to write some funny emotions. but in general, that's it.
LaurentCross
LaurentCrossLv13LaurentCross

Thanks for saving my time

TheLonelyGod
TheLonelyGodLv13TheLonelyGod

agreed on this! Why give Gamer's mind than!?

Seud:So he’s being controlled by the AI. That’s already a big no.
DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv6DarkKnight32

" or when the AI ​​of the system wants it" so the mc is controled by the system ok not gonna read this

SupremGG:it works at times, or when the AI ​​of the system wants it. I don't think anyone would like a mc pokerface without emotions, it would be monotone and boring, and I like to write some funny emotions. but in general, that's it.
DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv6DarkKnight32

in the end i read it yup its garbage

DarkKnight32:" or when the AI ​​of the system wants it" so the mc is controled by the system ok not gonna read this
EnkiduSky
EnkiduSkyLv1EnkiduSky

Bye

DarkKnight32:in the end i read it yup its garbage