Overall, the story is alright. Concepts and scenes are borrowed but twisted to fit in the story. The thing I find lacking is the character design. Chaos (She is added), Hestia, and Percy don't feel 'real'. They pout, they huff, they blush. It honestly feels like an anime rendition of Percy Jackson The Gamer.

I like the story quite a lot as the author did a good job of the way he progressed the story. I've always like gamer fan-fictions as they are a good concept.

Hey mhc, this is Eternal from discord, just realized you had account on webnovel. how come no pertemis/artemis tag? After all, on fanfic you have pertemis pairing. 5 stars from me! :D

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Just great fun to read, that basically sums it up. The only bad thing that it has (and it is understandable) are the updates that are every 2 months T_T, otherwise both in writing and character relationships and development of both story and characters is very good, it only remains to see how the story ends.

Hestia is the best goddess! Simping aside, beautifully done! I would love to read more but I will respect your available time and eagerly await the next chapter...

It really is an excellent fan fiction book, really entertaining story if you ask me i like this version of Percy more than the Rick Riordan version so keep going at it and all the best

Seeing as the world background from Percy Jackson I have to give a good score on 2 things. World Background and Character Design. Writing quality is. The stability updates range from daily to having to wait more than one week. But seeing it's fanfic and I've seen much slower inconsistent update schedules for a fanfic I say it rank's high. Although I've only 2 chapters. The second chapter strongly resembles if not DOWNRIGHT COPIED a chapter of a certain much older fanfic that has the exact same premise. I've only made 1 review and I only read 2 chapters. So please do not be upset. Still, though it was nice reading it.

The story is really well written with little to no grammatical errors. Plot flows smoothly and is enjoyable to read. Interactions don’t seem forced and women don’t instinctively fall heads over heels for him like every other fan fic. One of the best Percy Jackson fan fics I have read, all in all would recommend to at least give it a shot.