I will start from the beginning ;) The title is really great! (unusual at Webnovel ;)) The cover page - stunning! I would only change the place of the title and the font, because the whole composition is a bit disturbed. The story is nicely written! The plot is interesting, the characters also. Don't worry about minor mistakes. Every serious writer has an editor who deals with the correctness of the text, etc. and we do everything ourselves... ;) You're doing very well!
Chantielu
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LIKEIf it is your own project - congratulations! one od the best I saw on Webnovel...just the title doesn't go well with the composition.
Chantielu:thanks, I'm not so good at making book covers so, I appreciate the help