In terms of the story overall, stupendous ! While the concept of vampires has spanned countless lifetimes, this is one that gives the characters and the world— life. Speaking of characters, I found Dianna to be equivalent to freedom, so much so that it is blinding, and I enjoy her minute movements and the hints of comedy in here. There were a few issues about run-on sentences or the occasional verb misspellings, but this did not hamper my reading at all. So I will keep this at 5 stars for writing quality ! All in all, a polished gem that will hit fame sooner or later, so keep up the good work, Author !
Chantielu
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