Review Detail of heaven_vault in The Strongest Existence

truthfullynI only read the first chap and the reason I make this is because I was confused in what the author write. the simplest way to understand his writing is that he write the story in china and translate it using google translate, as there was thing that he say look like spear? or sword maybe? I don't really know but it was gigantic and he called it a gun. also the word for himself sometime get turned into you, which confuse me even more. as for the story it was fate x dxd probably as there was alaya, gaia, and noble phantasm that the author call as noble ghost.