Review Detail of Harvald in The Strongest Existence

Well, the prologue is simply bad and illogical. I am already considering to drop the story and I just finished the prologue. The author gave the Mc God Mode from the start and other characters act like idiots and without reason, he goes to Kuoh because of the original plot. It reads like the chuuni dream of a 14-year old hobby writer, who wrote without plan along with only just a rough idea towards a plotline. The sad thing is if the author had made an actual plan and reduced the chuuni-factor I believe this could have panned out as a relatively good story.