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I just read up to chapter 5, but I'd like to leave a review first 😬 This book is interesting. The genre is fresh and the storyline is quite intriguing. The design of the characters is good, the naming is unique as well. But, I'm not used to reading 3rd POV writings with the simple present tense. I think it's more common to use the simple past tense, but it's the author preference so I respect it 😅 Anyway, I'd like to give input for the dialogues. I think it's better to use double quotation marks for the dialogues. The single ones are usually used for thoughts. But, it's just input from me 😆 Overall, this book is worth reading [img=recommend]

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Strong Husband Of Flower

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Thanks for your comment. I take your word.. and I will change dialogue to double quotation mark. For tense used in the story, well.. I wanted to use past tense, but I want to try the present tense. Anyway, THANKS THANKS THANKS for your comment and recommend.