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Review Detail of Vostarian in One Piece: Reborn as Ace

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Vostarian
VostarianLv43yrVostarian

So far the novel is good, the MC seems ok, not dumb as most of one piece fanfic mc's. I can say this about this novel, if the author remains constant or improves on the mc character and those around him, the novel could be really successful. **. Author an advice from a reader, don't mess with the harem genre, if you choose to go also with romance theme sure go for it but pick 1-2 chicks, don't create a soccer team and than mess-up all your work. All in all, keep up the good work.

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One Piece: Reborn as Ace

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PaleKing
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Referring to some of the harems out there as soccer teams is a great reference as to what they feel like. I'm going to be using this one.