So far the novel is good, the MC seems ok, not dumb as most of one piece fanfic mc's. I can say this about this novel, if the author remains constant or improves on the mc character and those around him, the novel could be really successful. **. Author an advice from a reader, don't mess with the harem genre, if you choose to go also with romance theme sure go for it but pick 1-2 chicks, don't create a soccer team and than mess-up all your work. All in all, keep up the good work.
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