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Poison_Tester
Poison_TesterLv44yr
2020-11-03 11:34

So far seems pretty good. The author has a VERY similar style of writing like "HolyJoker", plus he himself reads this book. To me this fanfic deserves the prefect 5 star rating. Writing Quality- I didn't see any visible mistakes, everything was very clean and easy to read. Stability of Updates- So far it's 1-2 per day. Story Development- Smooth transitioning between scenes. Character Design- A SI Ace. Everything seems to go his way and usually I don't like that, but you have such a similar "HolyJoker" writing style that it seems to fit. (Basically "HolyJoker's" fanfics are popular because of his very smooth writing style, you have a very similar writing. Also they are popular for many other reasons also.) World Background- It's One Piece. Do I have to say more? (Alright if that wasn't enough. Here. So this story shows the charm of One Piece. I don't know how to explain it. Just watch One piece or read the manga.) Also Author if you read this, HAREM SECT FOR THE WIN. (Or act like Yami from HolyJoker's Naruto fanfic.)

One Piece: Reborn as Ace

MessyLife
4.9
42 Chs

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HolyJoker
HolyJokerLv5

Like the story overall, and especially with what I know that will go on in the future. I wish you success friend. Or I guess fellow author now.🤣🤣🤣🤣

4yr

CanYouMakeItClear
CanYouMakeItClearLv12

Since HolyJoker likes it, I guess it will be good. One-piece settings and being reborn as Ace. Dunno what's gonna happen, since it has only 1 chapter. Wish you luck, dude!

4yr
MessyLife
MessyLifeAuthor

AUTHOR HERE!!! This is my first story ever, hope you guys like it. Also English is not my first language. I have had this idea in my head and with medical school lately being so... I thought why not. I wanted to upload it in another account which I have had for longer but I forgot the password to that email so I opened a new webnovel account. Hope you like it.

4yr
Morpheus146
Morpheus146Lv4

So far the novel is good, the MC seems ok, not dumb as most of one piece fanfic mc's. I can say this about this novel, if the author remains constant or improves on the mc character and those around him, the novel could be really successful. **. Author an advice from a reader, don't mess with the harem genre, if you choose to go also with romance theme sure go for it but pick 1-2 chicks, don't create a soccer team and than mess-up all your work. All in all, keep up the good work.

4yr
John_Jostar
John_JostarLv5

I love this story surprised that no one has done it before. thank you for the wonderful story😀 and happy thanksgiving 🦃

4yr
OllieZ
OllieZLv6

Really nice story. Your grammar is great and your story has so much potential. I just want to ask you the author to keep writing and update regularly. That is the most important. I log in daily looking for chapters and I would love to keep reading this story for many days/months to come!! hehe What I am hoping for: hardworker MC, gradual strength gain, no canon rehash, making his own crew, no goro goro no mi for the Mc(there are too many MC with this devil fruit... give him to ond of his crewmates), creative uses of DF, no waifu catching like they're pokemons and get cool devil fruits for his crewmates... PD: If you make an unpopular decision and people flame you, just ignore them. Even though the people in this site are really basic, they would hate on you of you write beta MC, bisexual/gay MC, bisexual/lesbian partners, NTR and an promiscous female partner🙃🙃

4yr
GRAVITY
GRAVITYLv5

First time reading a fanfic of MC being ACE. Have high expectations.😁🤞 Till now story is going excellent 😄. Good Luck and please don't drop the story 👍.

4yr
DogeLuvReadin
DogeLuvReadinLv13

This is good. Its got short chapters bur it seems Like author udates daily ao its okay.😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😉😇😇😇😇

4yr
King_H
King_HLv14

You know it a great story when holyjoker give it a good review, so let give it a try so gl⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

4yr
The_Tube
The_TubeLv5

absolutely love this book!!! the development is also amazing!!! one of the best book i've read!!! pliz keep writing!!! pliz update frequently!!!

4yr
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