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4.0/5 Definitely an interesting and weird (but in a good way!) story. It's fast-paced and the story develops quickly. Lots of action and mini-conflicts. There's some grammatical errors, however. For example, sometimes the story switches from past tense to present, then back again and so on. For a story told in third person like this one, I suggest keeping it in past tense, as that's what works best normally. I also would've loved to see Harrison try to adjust into his new gender, which I feel like should've happened. But other than that, keep it up, author! [img=recommend]

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Gender Genesis: Chance in a different gender.

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Thank you for your review!