Honestly..? I really liked it. The pacing was fine and nothing seemed to be out of line. A good piece, overall, with the well-said descriptions and the well-rounded characters. Adding this to library for now...will check back soon!
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LIKEOemar_danoes:Thank you, your story is also good! Can't wait for the next thing from you!