Review Detail of callmeotooosan in Gender Genesis: Chance in a different gender.

For the plot is give this an A, as the Gender Bender wasn't uncommon but it is pretty scarce/rare. The whole thought, I get it, and I also like it. But the author should work on the grammar, punctuations proper adjectives, commas etcetera. Sure it is a tempting thing to use metaphors and speech tags, but use the appropriate ones. If that is fixed then your novel would improve by leap and bounds.🙂😶