Review Detail of dead_oop in Gender Genesis: Chance in a different gender.

The author's way of writing is impressive, you explained things quite well in chapter one. However, I don't feel many emotions coming from Harrishine, I am sure this will improve gradually. I hope the author will make this a bit slow-paced explaining her feeling and the surrounding in much more detail. I love the characters themselves and their way of thinking. Can't wait for more chapters, best of luck.