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Hi Kystal88! I read a few chapters in, and, for the most part, I enjoy what I read! I will say that it feels a bit heavy at the start, and I wasn't sure exactly what was going on, but details slowly presented themselves and I got a grasp for the story! I very much enjoy your ability to paint a picture with your words, as well! The exposition is decently paced, as is the dialogue. Please keep it up, I look forward to reading more in the future!