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The story has a great flow and the description of the character's experience is very detailed which makes it easier for the readers to relate to them. There are hardly any grammar problems and I really liked how you can understand the MC's train of thoughts making it easier to understand and relate to her. However, there was only one problem. Perhaps, not put the question sentences into one paragraph, maybe? It was a little much from mobile point of view...

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Thank you for the review! I am really gald you liked it! Also, now that you mention it, i will exlude the questions from the paragraphs. thank you again for the review!