OK so I'm just gonna say that the premise on which the story is built is quite entertaining as well as unique the fact that Thea's dream man is real is truly quite intriguing and their first meeting is also entertaining . Character development is OK as I can actually understand Thea but York still needs a little bit more fleshing out the main issue with your story is grammar. Due to the grammar used I found it very difficult to actually follow the book. the grammar needs a lot of work I do hope that the author tries to fix the grammatical issues of the novel so as to make it easier to read anyways nice storylineđ
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