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kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv34yr
2021-01-22 14:19

You have an interesting plot with an outstanding book cover! I like how the author creates the conflict and would be later on fixed while the story progresses. The passion is there, and I could bet it would reward you soon! The only advises that I can give you are few suggestion to edit the paragraphs from here and there. There are missing and numerous commas, your and you're (difference between words), and some sentences that are slightly difficult to understand. But don't be down because English is an arduous thing to learn. In no time, you will notice these errors and fix them in due time! Nevertheless, I believe that that story has some potential, and I invite you all to read this book

THE LAST ASSASSIN(Rinleigh's Legend)

Xien_xien
4.5
201 Chs

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Xien_xien
Xien_xienAuthor

thank you so much for appreciating my works😊

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Xien_xien
Xien_xienAuthor

ill be noting those suggestion 😊thank you

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Yotol
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Question about the harem tag, is she gonna have a boys harem?

Xien_xien:thank you so much for appreciating my works😊
3yr
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Xien_xien
Xien_xienAuthor

sort of? hahahha

Yotol:Question about the harem tag, is she gonna have a boys harem?
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Liber8T
Liber8TLv4

my disgust is immesureable and my stomach is ruined

Xien_xien:sort of? hahahha
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