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sorry for late reply it was mid night here. okay. it is not a real harem to say. i thought of making it harem but then readers said that there are already many harem book out there so please don't make it harem. adding romance or harem will only take the main goal the main plot away. it will disturb the main plot. The system that is in this plot will fly and the harem will be be like the main plot. actually i even added the tag harem it the start but. oh yeah, All girls after some time will be drooling over the MC. but he will only go for his 1love interest. I dunno if you hold that as a harem or not. i will just add some 1 love interest for MC and that also at the end. kekeke. what do you think? you wanted harem? tell me. đ
Ancient_Egyptian:harem or it's not?
it's more like me not liking none harem novel...I had been reading many novels with one love interest but it always becomes hard to continue reading with how most authors make their MCs like cold, indifferent, and always arrogant to make some cool scenes and he needs to work hard to make the girl he loves accept him or make him try to impress her family or she is super strong ao he needs to be stronger to feel worthy of her...that is just boring and most of the novel is just dry to read...the most annoying part of this kind of one love interest is that some authors if they make the MC with his love interest from the beginning then she has to be a trouble-magnet or a flower-vase like it is some sacred method to generate incidents...or those who have to make them love each other dearly and starting their journey at the exact time but they had to separate and meets every few ARCs... truth to be told...I read a few rare Novels that their authors make a beautiful one-to-one relationship and this kind is so successful and likeable to most of the readers... In the end, if you notice then you will discover that most of this novel that has one love interest (aside from the boring content) had been focused on "how the MC is going to have a happy ending with his true love" so the difference between harem and none-harem novels is just about the glaring issue of whether the Harem members is just not worthy of being there or how lame their reasons to accept a relationship with a man who has other love interest and of course how can the author make a good and interesting plot even if he uses the most basic Cliche. and don't forget that most harem novel author tends to make a hasty relationship with or without reason and this unacceptable to most readers but the, in the end, the harem concept when the author used it just enough to make a good romance or to make more drama without making them a bunch of useless women then he gives us a masterpiece and is numerous examples of awesome novels with reasonable harem concept. So yeah, I like harem novels more than non-harem novels. also, thanks for replying to me.
AJPaturde:sorry for late reply it was mid night here. okay. it is not a real harem to say. i thought of making it harem but then readers said that there are already many harem book out there so please don't make it harem. adding romance or harem will only take the main goal the main plot away. it will disturb the main plot. The system that is in this plot will fly and the harem will be be like the main plot. actually i even added the tag harem it the start but. oh yeah, All girls after some time will be drooling over the MC. but he will only go for his 1love interest. I dunno if you hold that as a harem or not. i will just add some 1 love interest for MC and that also at the end. kekeke. what do you think? you wanted harem? tell me. đ
Man you got it wrong. actually i also hate the scene when the MC is going behind for the FL to accept his love. honestly I also hate that. the thing that i was saying is that, the FL will like the MC, and MC will be so dumb that he will not even notice that she is loving him. Also the girls of his school will also drol over him. That dumb MC will not even notice that every girl is behind him. but i will put this romance and harem after 100 ch. i guess. So i just want to tell you try this book. there will be slow harem but it will be worth it.
Ancient_Egyptian:it's more like me not liking none harem novel...I had been reading many novels with one love interest but it always becomes hard to continue reading with how most authors make their MCs like cold, indifferent, and always arrogant to make some cool scenes and he needs to work hard to make the girl he loves accept him or make him try to impress her family or she is super strong ao he needs to be stronger to feel worthy of her...that is just boring and most of the novel is just dry to read...the most annoying part of this kind of one love interest is that some authors if they make the MC with his love interest from the beginning then she has to be a trouble-magnet or a flower-vase like it is some sacred method to generate incidents...or those who have to make them love each other dearly and starting their journey at the exact time but they had to separate and meets every few ARCs... truth to be told...I read a few rare Novels that their authors make a beautiful one-to-one relationship and this kind is so successful and likeable to most of the readers... In the end, if you notice then you will discover that most of this novel that has one love interest (aside from the boring content) had been focused on "how the MC is going to have a happy ending with his true love" so the difference between harem and none-harem novels is just about the glaring issue of whether the Harem members is just not worthy of being there or how lame their reasons to accept a relationship with a man who has other love interest and of course how can the author make a good and interesting plot even if he uses the most basic Cliche. and don't forget that most harem novel author tends to make a hasty relationship with or without reason and this unacceptable to most readers but the, in the end, the harem concept when the author used it just enough to make a good romance or to make more drama without making them a bunch of useless women then he gives us a masterpiece and is numerous examples of awesome novels with reasonable harem concept. So yeah, I like harem novels more than non-harem novels. also, thanks for replying to me.
I am okay with that but Why willl you do that? i mean will there be any benefit for you? Using my story and then translate is will only make you come under the copyright act and hence for translating my story because of the copyright you will only have to pay me for that. I am okay with that though. i am glad you choosed my novel.
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AJPaturde:Man you got it wrong. actually i also hate the scene when the MC is going behind for the FL to accept his love. honestly I also hate that. the thing that i was saying is that, the FL will like the MC, and MC will be so dumb that he will not even notice that she is loving him. Also the girls of his school will also drol over him. That dumb MC will not even notice that every girl is behind him. but i will put this romance and harem after 100 ch. i guess. So i just want to tell you try this book. there will be slow harem but it will be worth it.
Okay then, no need to apologise just go ahead and translate my novel, but don't forget to mention me!! Please do mention my name. Thank you for your time.
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hahahah. some readers are also saying the same dude. LoL they also think this is a copy of that novel, but let me be honest here I have not read the novel yet so no question this is the synopsis of my own imagination and creation.
Duck_God:did u get inspired by house of horrors the synopsis was a bit similar just not horror focused
Ancient_Egyptian:so in the end of this story he will get a harem or one wife.
ah yeah and also, as you said this novel is more system focused thank it is that of horror. so may think this is more a system novel, but now to forget this novel is in the genre of horror. if you read this novel them too may expect some surprises. Thank you for checking my novel out man.
Duck_God:did u get inspired by house of horrors the synopsis was a bit similar just not horror focused
AJPaturde:not at all of course he is not going to marry officially. he will prefer living a happy harem life.
AJPaturde:ah yeah and also, as you said this novel is more system focused thank it is that of horror. so may think this is more a system novel, but now to forget this novel is in the genre of horror. if you read this novel them too may expect some surprises. Thank you for checking my novel out man.
Man, I met someone who understands the problem with OTP novels. You took the words out of my mouth. The one person pairing has become so boring after reading most of them. The drama or tragedy that comes with them is also becoming similar. And so harem is the way. We don't need the guy to do everything for one woman while she waits for him to come to her and simp for her. Anyway, can you tell me is this story a harem or not? I didn't understand what the author saidđ
Ancient_Egyptian:it's more like me not liking none harem novel...I had been reading many novels with one love interest but it always becomes hard to continue reading with how most authors make their MCs like cold, indifferent, and always arrogant to make some cool scenes and he needs to work hard to make the girl he loves accept him or make him try to impress her family or she is super strong ao he needs to be stronger to feel worthy of her...that is just boring and most of the novel is just dry to read...the most annoying part of this kind of one love interest is that some authors if they make the MC with his love interest from the beginning then she has to be a trouble-magnet or a flower-vase like it is some sacred method to generate incidents...or those who have to make them love each other dearly and starting their journey at the exact time but they had to separate and meets every few ARCs... truth to be told...I read a few rare Novels that their authors make a beautiful one-to-one relationship and this kind is so successful and likeable to most of the readers... In the end, if you notice then you will discover that most of this novel that has one love interest (aside from the boring content) had been focused on "how the MC is going to have a happy ending with his true love" so the difference between harem and none-harem novels is just about the glaring issue of whether the Harem members is just not worthy of being there or how lame their reasons to accept a relationship with a man who has other love interest and of course how can the author make a good and interesting plot even if he uses the most basic Cliche. and don't forget that most harem novel author tends to make a hasty relationship with or without reason and this unacceptable to most readers but the, in the end, the harem concept when the author used it just enough to make a good romance or to make more drama without making them a bunch of useless women then he gives us a masterpiece and is numerous examples of awesome novels with reasonable harem concept. So yeah, I like harem novels more than non-harem novels. also, thanks for replying to me.
Oh ... I don't start the novel yet so I can't give you the final answer but if you want to understand what the author said then okay .... Basically he said: 1. He was planning for harem. 2. Many readers complained about it. 3. He decided to go with one love Interest(The main heroine). 4. Then the other part of the readers want a harem(Me as example). 5. He decided to make the 100 chapters without romance and make the MC dense. 6. After 100 chapters he will add the romantic plot. 7. Then the MC will be the love Interest of many girls but he will end with only the main heroine.(And truthfully I am not sure of he don't change his mind). 8. And here I waiting for something like +200 to ask the author if he decided to end the novel with only the main girl as the MC wife or there will be harem. 9. The Conclusion ---> This novel has some kind of pseudo-harem (The kind you see in japanese anime) but whether the author is going to make a true one or not is not clear enough for me. 10. I know that this is not what you want to know but this the best I can do for you. Hope this help.đ
Narutoss5:Man, I met someone who understands the problem with OTP novels. You took the words out of my mouth. The one person pairing has become so boring after reading most of them. The drama or tragedy that comes with them is also becoming similar. And so harem is the way. We don't need the guy to do everything for one woman while she waits for him to come to her and simp for her. Anyway, can you tell me is this story a harem or not? I didn't understand what the author saidđ
Narutoss5:So... Basically an open end with no wife, i.e, no marriage but mc with one girl and other girls for Mc?! What am I even writing ? Basically it looks like false harem, so... I hate that more than OTP
Or sorry it was a reply to Meky. What I was trying to say that according to you the Mc will not marry anyone and will stay with the main female lead as well as other females? So it becomes an open end ?
AJPaturde:. .. .sorry but what are you talking about.. .. ?