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AJPaturde
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The Paranormal system!

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BookWorm69
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kinda sus how nobody has pointed out how this is a copy of my "house of horrors" I'm not saying this novel is bad, because I didn't even bother to read this tbh. but seeing your grammar and the obvious bots who all give 5 star rating. in description it says. "Does this even starts?" <---- if errors like this are throughout the novel then it doesn't deserve 5 star writing quality. in description it says. "Does this even starts?" <---- if errors like this are throughout the novel then it doesnt deserve 5 star writing quality, i doubt even fans would fake review that.

AJPaturde
AJPaturdeAuthorAJPaturde

haha. bro it is not a copy of house of horrors. in that book 📒 📓 the MC has a system in his housee, here the MC has a system in his mobile. and please point out more grammar mistakes and also why are you point ing them out, that will help me. TBH I am writing this work for the WPC and the plot of this book is of course provided by the WN so there is a chance you might feel this book is a copy. but it is not. please try reading this book before you judge it. judging is not a good thing. Immature- judge. mature- First understand and then judge. choose what are you?

BookWorm69:kinda sus how nobody has pointed out how this is a copy of my "house of horrors" I'm not saying this novel is bad, because I didn't even bother to read this tbh. but seeing your grammar and the obvious bots who all give 5 star rating. in description it says. "Does this even starts?" <---- if errors like this are throughout the novel then it doesn't deserve 5 star writing quality. in description it says. "Does this even starts?" <---- if errors like this are throughout the novel then it doesnt deserve 5 star writing quality, i doubt even fans would fake review that.
AJPaturde
AJPaturdeAuthorAJPaturde

ahah. one more thing. i donno how to use bots to give rating for my own book. sorry to disappoint you. but there are people who are loving my book.

BookWorm69:kinda sus how nobody has pointed out how this is a copy of my "house of horrors" I'm not saying this novel is bad, because I didn't even bother to read this tbh. but seeing your grammar and the obvious bots who all give 5 star rating. in description it says. "Does this even starts?" <---- if errors like this are throughout the novel then it doesn't deserve 5 star writing quality. in description it says. "Does this even starts?" <---- if errors like this are throughout the novel then it doesnt deserve 5 star writing quality, i doubt even fans would fake review that.
BookWorm69
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lol what do you mean, the system is also on a phone in that book. Also I only commented but didn't put a review is exactly because I didn't bother reading anything but the description since book only has 10 chapters so far. The description makes it sound like a copy of the house of horrors. old cellphone found in attic containing system. ✔ The mc's parents have gone missing ✔ the only thing different the description provides is that he has a sister.

AJPaturde:haha. bro it is not a copy of house of horrors. in that book 📒 📓 the MC has a system in his housee, here the MC has a system in his mobile. and please point out more grammar mistakes and also why are you point ing them out, that will help me. TBH I am writing this work for the WPC and the plot of this book is of course provided by the WN so there is a chance you might feel this book is a copy. but it is not. please try reading this book before you judge it. judging is not a good thing. Immature- judge. mature- First understand and then judge. choose what are you?
BookWorm69
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fair enough, I guess I went too far with that comment. :x

AJPaturde:ahah. one more thing. i donno how to use bots to give rating for my own book. sorry to disappoint you. but there are people who are loving my book.
AJPaturde
AJPaturdeAuthorAJPaturde

hahahaha. i have not read the whole book. but thank you. the reason it had only 10 ch. is because it is new.