webnovel

Review Detail of TheMightyPEN in Reborn in Naruto "survive or be killed"

Review detail

TheMightyPEN
TheMightyPENAuthor3yrTheMightyPEN

Hello author here this is my first story so please let me know what I can improve on. It would be greatly appreciated I just enjoy naruto and saw a lot of bad fanfics so I thought I should try it because I love this franchise

Reborn in Naruto "survive or be killed"

TheMightyPEN

Liked it!

LIKE

Replies1

Ken_Reader
Ken_ReaderLv4Ken_Reader

umm can you fix the sentences and it's hard to read which is which is speaking.