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2020-10-25 12:13

i dont exactly know how to feel, but sometimes this story actually makes me wonder what will come next, the best part seems to come after chapter 27, but I really have to go back reread the rest of the story sometimes

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Thanks for the review! I try my best with the cliffhangers and I understand how impossible the other chapters are to read. Chapter 26-27 is when my writing format kinda improved! The other chapters have way too much put into a paragraph! I plan to go back and rewrite it eventually, but until then, please keep your reviews coming so I can learn what to change!

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