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Inferno_Vor
Inferno_VorLv133yrInferno_Vor

Pretty bad writing but readable(he/she mistakes, incorrect sentance ordering and autocorrect mistakes(eg. instead of bloodline/lineage it's written language)) Classic OP MC story with a lot of timeskips till MC is really strong. Honestly the story is really cringe with a lot of weird events. For example Akeno knowing how to go to the Underworld. How does she know to get back even if she knows to get there? I don't think Baraqiel would make such a dumb mistake to show his daughter magic to go to the Underworld and that she would know to utilize it so young. So lots of plotholes. Or when he meets Rias and visits the Gremory mansion and no one questions a human being there and are just friendly. Or how Akeno isn't confused how he knew what happened to her. Honestly the characters are awful. They feel pretty mechanic as do the interactions between them, like they only talk to progress the plot or just to make us know info. The only good thing feels like it's the update stability which is normal for a novel that just started... I recommend reading if you have nothing better or are just bored, even then you might not like it and stop

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proddy69
proddy69Authorproddy69

Thanks for the feedback, I feel that really the experience is not very pleasant at first since things were not very clear, I also intend to improve the dialogs of the characters to make it more human. Thanks again.

Inferno_Vor
Inferno_VorLv13Inferno_Vor

Glad you didn't take offense to the review when I write them I tend to get to passionate and make it seem more personal than need be, but gl man

proddy69:Thanks for the feedback, I feel that really the experience is not very pleasant at first since things were not very clear, I also intend to improve the dialogs of the characters to make it more human. Thanks again.