I wrote this fanfic just for fun on my phone. I never ask for donation or receiving any money from this. Since i'm not a native english speaker, you will find many grammar mistakes in this fanfic. Hope you enjoy to read this fanfic. Also don't force me or tell me to fix the grammar since i don't have time and i wrote this only in my free time. Thanks...

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While the concept of this fanfic is really good, the author doesn't make any efforts into actually telling the story, there are barely any conversations. In a sense, this fanfic is like a report, or a summary of a story if you will, but not really a story. The world building is close to inexistent (even if it's One Piece so readers should already know it by now, if only marginally) and it is the same for the character development. We have almost nk info on the Mc, and we don't have any conversation between them. As I said, it's more of a summary than a true story, which is sad because the concept is really good and fairly appealing. I know there aren't many chapters yet (12 as of writing this review) but as long as the author doesn't put more effort to make of this idea a true story instead of a summary, I'm dropping it now, but will keep it in my library.

This Fanfic is really not like the other One piece fanfics out there. Love the Story...... ...................................................Just read the book worth the time.

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well its interesting because mc didn't use system to always purchase Instant OP Power, beside the early chapter & even then he have to work hard to truly become as powerful as these Famous Pirate. also the logical reaction & interaction between fan-fiction world & Real World is interesting as well & manage to help reader keep read this story despite that more than half of content of each chapter id about re-writing cannon plot story with nonexistence character interaction. it's still a few chapter so future reviee may come at Comment section.

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