Bruh this is a sincerely good story idea. But you make a lot of grammar mistakes so it gets pretty hard to get the full experience of reading a book/novel/fanfiction.
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LIKEI would appreciate if you, or anyone else commented where the biggest mistakes where so i can fix them later
Rotten_Sarcophagus:sorry about that, i'm pretty dumb and english is my third language