I'll open with this: BL and Romance aren't exactly my cup of tea. This story, though? I may actually wind up reading it all the way through despite that, because it is very well put-together! The pacing doesn't leave a reader seeking more or less of any particular element, and while the grammar has some minor mistakes, it doesn't detract from the series of events the Author is building. All-in-all, I highly encourage giving this story a read, as it seem to have great things in its future. Keep up the good work, Author! <3
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