Review Detail of Skylock in My Family Are Yanderes (Reboot)

I think that the story has potential, however, the grammar of the novel is flawed, and the flow of the story becomes somewhat hard to read or to understand, I definitely recommend an editor and I have already pointed out a few flaws in the first chapters. I hope that the author will notice some of my comments, and if he deems it right, I hope he changes it.