The story got lots of potential depending of where you are going, the quality of the writing needs work but I mostly understand the idea in watch paragraph. The updates schedule is unknown maybe more frequent if this gains popularity. I give it 3 stars cause you are still beginning the story/worldbuilding. I hope your story continues and your quality reaches a new level.
Ru_ri
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LIKENo worries mate, I personally love this type of story so I am quite happy, but there are a lot of people who will automatically correct any mistakes.
Ru_ri:I edited the chapters i kinda just put them without even reviewing the mistakes ^~^