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maxgonz
maxgonzLv123yrmaxgonz

Honestly just read this novel because I was bored and I wasn't expecting much. But I must say wow, did this exceed my expectations. Although it is true that.grammar and writing could be polished the novel was entering throughout the whole 200+ chapters I have read so far. Plus it's completely free, compared to some novels in which writing quality is the same or worse and still put a pay wall. All in all definitely recommend, no paywall, intriguing story and although writing needs polishing definitely understandable and flows decently. P.S author I'm not sure if you have already but if not I would recommend you setting up a pattern if you're not gonna set up premium chapters, just add some benefits that come with supporting you and I'm sure you can make some befitting of your work!

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Myriad Realms Grand Manager with a God Class System.

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tempestpanda
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buddy, can you please point out some mistakes in the novel so that I can accept my mistakes and improve.😙

maxgonz
maxgonzLv12maxgonz

No problem! The biggest thing is definitely grammar, that being said it has definitely improved through the story. But, you should definitely get and editor or you yourself to edit and fix some mistakes made earlier on especially. other than that it would be nice if you could make a more detailed explanation on how power rankings work in this world as I'm still largely confused on how they work (mostly don't understand the trial and the skill crystals). Other than that your work is great!

tempestpanda:buddy, can you please point out some mistakes in the novel so that I can accept my mistakes and improve.😙