The synopsis is really interesting. It makes you think of the other side of the usual fairy tale story. The story itself has great potential. There are only minor grammatical mistakes but it can be overlooked. Your storytelling is captivating. Spoiler alert! ⚠ I really thought the first part of the story was real. I was surprised when the director said "Cut!" It just goes to show how enthralling your storytelling is. Great work, author 😊
WinterLeaf
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