Review Detail of Crackgear in Unknown. banc

The writing quality is pretty decent for a beginner. Not too shabby and also hits a nice tone from to time. Only confusing bits are random copyrighted items which don't really need to be used in exchange for more detailing such as colour, material, laces and etc. Could work out but that depends mostly on the efficiency and effort put up by the author. GOod work for now though. Stability of Updates is pretty decent as the author is still pretty new. Story development-wise, It seems pretty normal though it is a little wonky from time to time. Lack of grammar and vocabulary puts up with the trouble too that occurs. Needs a little check-up. World backgrounds wise, it's pretty good, especially the character's personality and stereotypical design, it's quite good and could also be better. Continue with your works, AUthor. Keep up the good work! With as much of a heart, I can say you can get better soon over time and age. :D