An Honest Review: The novel is actually good to read, but some matters here and there don't make sense. To name a few: 1. Different anime characters are in KnB? Like i dont get it all, it's pointless and not appetizing to read. This is the world of KnB for Pete's sake! 2. No clarification of other parts of the system making us readers left hanging. If you AUTHOR-SAN want your readers to know what you're imagining at least explain it well. 3. The language of the kids, I mean like in the first few chapters a f***** 6 year old kids dont speak like that! It's pretty weird as f***. 4. The AUTHOR (IF YOU'RE READING THIS) if you truly did watch KnB, make some alignment with it along with the X-factor MC there. 5. Make sure to emphasize proper nouns to improper one's. I'm sure you (AUTHOR-SAN) are an educated fellow. 6. This is my honest review, you can also say a critique of mine, you can just bypass this one for God's sake but bear in mind if you don't accept criticism you won't grow in this field AUTHOR-SAN (SEEMS HARSH? nah im just being real here)
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