Item: DO YOU TRUST ME?
Rating: 5
Author: EmpRabbit

EmpRabbitLv134yr

2020-10-22 22:56

I like the way you start your book and so far it seems like an interesting plot. One thing to take note of is to check the punctuations of some of your sentences. Some of them should be split up in smaller ones and others would need some commas. Aside from that, the writing quality is good. I can't say much else as you only have two chapters so far, but I'll keep on reading when you update more. Keep up the good work, author!

DO YOU TRUST ME?

Elijah_weiss

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Elijah_weissAuthor

Thank you very much for your review. I'll try to correct them. Thank you. I can't wait for your reactions on the later chapters Enjoy your day!

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